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The Power of Internet
“The internet
provides many conveniences for modern life but these are outweighed by the
dangers it presents.”
NO.
PARAGRAPH TOPIC
BRIEF EXPLANATION
1
1st – INTRODUCTION
-Definition
of internet, and general use in nowadays life.
-Introduce
the issue of people debating about the good and the bad of the internet.
-Thesis
statement: This essay will give a little insight about the advantages and
disadvantages of both impacts.
2
2nd
– CONVENIENCES OF INTERNET
Major Support 1:
-Easy to get
information, knowledge, and learning.
Minor:
E-learning, E-book, Google.
Major Support 2:
-Communication
become possible, unlimited by distance.
Minor:
Line, WhatsApp, Skypee.
Major Support 3:
-Cashless
transaction, and online shopping.
Minor:
OVO, Tokopedia, Shoppee.
3
3rd – DANGERS OF INTERNET
Major Support 1:
-Internet
scamming is everywhere.
Major Support 2:
-Personal
info or any important data that are stored are vulnerable to be stolen.
Minor:
Cyber hacking, fake ID.
Major Support 3:
-Inappropriate
content that could destroy morality.
Minor:
Pornography, Sex Online Website.
4
4th –
CONCLUSION
-Summary of
both impacts
-State my
opinion about the Internet impacts.
Internet. Who doesn’t
know about it?
Internet is a tool that
we’ve been using for so much in our life, that it can even be considered as something
that we cannot live without. It can’t be denied that internet has been very
useful for people. It helps us to do so many things that we aren’t able to do
before. Whether you’re looking for a recipe, a new house, a new job, a
scholarship, or even just for entertainment, it’s all there. Now, because of
this wide capability that the internet has, people have been giving opinion
about the possibility that internet could create. Some argue that people nowadays
depend too much on the internet, that it leads to the crisis of identity.
Contrastly, some also state that internet has helped people so much in terms of
communication, gaining information, etc. This essay will be discussing about
the advantages and disadvantages of both impacts.
First, the internet is a
world-wide bank of information. With the internet, people are able to get an
information in a blink of an eye. Curious on how to play a guitar? You could search
for it on Youtube. Searching for books with another language? Simply search the
e-book. Unlimited knowledge that you desire to know is there. Internet has also
a tool that connects all people around the world. People don’t need to go to a
public place to contact someone. Many application supported by the internet
such as Line, WhatsApp, or Skype helps people to connect with each other
unlimited by distance. Other than that, internet has also revolutionized the
way people trade. Through online shopping such as Tokopedia, Shoppee, etc. it
is unnecessary for people to go to a market anymore.
However, some people also
believe that the internet has caused a lot of bad impacts. One of the reason is
that using internet, people now could easily hide their real identity and
performing so many internet scamming, tricking people into paying an amount of
money to their bank account. Some other reason regarding identity is that with
a knowledge of the online security and some coding, people are able to perform
a hacking and stole confidential information or personal information of
someone. Another example of the bad use of internet is that people could access
easily to a website with inappropriate contents that could destroy their
morality.
In conclusion, we can see
that internet could both cause a good thing and bad impacts on our life. It
could either helps us so much with the ease of gaining information, or it could
also be misused and threaten the confidentiality of our life. In my opinion,
internet has provided us with a lot of sophisticated features to ease our daily
life needs. Consequently, this capability could also leads us to the danger of
privacy, such as personal information stealing. Therefore, internet is the best
source for us to get so many knowledge on condition that we are aware about the
dangers itself.
Hello! It is a very nice article but i think it would be better if you add more definition based on proffesionals person or perhaps researches about it, so your article can be more valid, interesting, and trustworthy
Overall it's a very nice essay, what bothering me is that the disadvantage that you show in your essay only explains about scam identity, its different from your outline, where is the pornography ? Thanks
this is my favorite author for making an essay , i really like how you choose the word . And maybe in the conclusion you can give some advice to the people who have addicted to the internet.
Hello! It is a very nice article but i think it would be better if you add more definition based on proffesionals person or perhaps researches about it, so your article can be more valid, interesting, and trustworthy
ReplyDeleteWoww thank you for, I'll add that laterr!
DeleteClear and easy to understand your essay. I agree with your opinion
ReplyDeleteHello jo, i think the word "Shoppee" is actually "shopee" hehe
ReplyDeletenice essay!
Overall it's a very nice essay, what bothering me is that the disadvantage that you show in your essay only explains about scam identity, its different from your outline, where is the pornography ? Thanks
ReplyDeleteIt is really nice to read. Good essay joo i don't find any mistake.
ReplyDeleteReally good essay.
ReplyDeleteNice essay. Can't find any mistakes here
ReplyDeleteJust make little space because its too closer word
ReplyDeleteNice essay
ReplyDeleteGreat essay
ReplyDeleteIt's really good explanation. I can't find any mistake... it's too perfect Jo... Good job!
ReplyDeletethis is my favorite author for making an essay , i really like how you choose the word . And maybe in the conclusion you can give some advice to the people who have addicted to the internet.
ReplyDeleteWow, it's a great essay
ReplyDeleteall the benefits and drawbacks are very real, it is a very perfect essay. and also the use of the right choice of words.
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