A Better Place
TABLE OF
ESSAY – GLOBALIZATION TOPIC OUTLINE
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Paragraph 1
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Introduction and Thesis Statement
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Globalization effects on Indonesian Women.
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Paragraph 2
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M.S - 1, Fashion Style
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Hairstyle, Make-up, and Daily Clothes.
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Paragraph 3
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M.S - 2, High standard of Lifestyle
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Gadget, Transportation, Trends, Skincare, Hobby.
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Paragraph 4
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M.S - 3 , Liberty
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Gender equality, Independence Women, Feminism,
Acceptance.
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Paragraph 5
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Conclusion and Closing statement.
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Summary.
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Globalization has become one of
the most influencial things that happened in this world. Globalization has
affected so many aspects in everyday lives in every age, genders, and nations.
It also affected a lot of things from food, culture, economy, industry,
lifestyle, education, etc. This essay will be talking specifically on how
globalization effects on women in Indonesia, starting from their Fashion Sense,
lifestyle, and Liberty.
First of all, the fashion sense.
Many years before, Indonesian women aren’t as free as they currently are in
terms of expressing their clothes. Especially because Indonesia is one of a
country that has a high respect of religion, Indonesian women aren’t actually
allowed to wear daily clothes that are considered ‘too-much-to-see’. In terms
of their daily clothes, Indonesian women are expected to wear a highly-covered
clothes, and other than that would become a trending topic nearby their
neighbourhood. But as globalization occurs, Indonesian women are starting to
adapt the daily style from the other countries, and started to vary with so
many daily clothes style, including the previous style that are controversial
in the country. Nowadays, women are brave enough to wear a short pants and a
tank-top to go out from their house.
Second is the Lifestyle. There
are so many aspects that could be discussed regarding this topic, but this
essay will only covered a very small portion, focusing on the mindset of urban-lifestyle.
Before, Indonesian women couldn’t care less about how their skin look like, what
colour their skintone is, or what kind of transportation that they take. Even
most of the time, Indonesian women would walk their way into a certain place
that they desire to go. However, adapting the other countries lifestyle,
Indonesian women nowadays started to shift their mindset into thinking that
they have to care too much about everything in order to achieve the
urban-lifestyle standard. One of the most famous example that are still
trending right now, is Skincare. There are no such thing as that in the before
era, but since Globalization starts to hit Indonesia, mostly adapting from
Korea, Indonesian women started to follow these lifestyle, and starts to buy so
many products just for their face. They also has a standard that they have to
be skinny, have an hour-glass body, and glowing-glass skin in order that
achieve the lifestyle standard.
Lastly, in terms of Liberty.
Before, Indonesian women are expected to be at home all the time, they don’t
have to care too much about their education, or choosing their life-partner, they
aren’t even allowed to find a job that are ‘made’ for men, etc. But since
Globalization strikes all of the liberty, it could be said that it has affected
women liberty in a huge amount of impact. Nowadays, Indonesian women can be seen
as a politicians, as a manager, or any other high positions that seems to be
impossible to be achieved by women in the past. Also, there can be seen so many
women are united and keep demonstrate about ‘gender equality’ and women’s
right. It is all part of the globalization that changed the mindset of the
women in Indonesia.
There are still so many things
that has changed over the century because of Globalization. Fashion, Lifestyle,
and Liberty are only a small portion of it. But it can be concluded that
Globalization plays a big role in terms of world-change, and create the life of
Indonesian women into a better place.....or worst.
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Wow. It's so impressive!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kim!
DeleteI agree with you, because mostly globalization is not only affects good things, but also the bad things
ReplyDeleteIndeed, it is important for us to understand the effects of it.
Deleteagree with your fourth paragraph, sometimes women's are smarter then a men.
ReplyDeleteI felt honored hearing it from you, lol.
Deletethis one is interesting because not much article talk about this
ReplyDeletewa, thank you for the comment.
DeleteThis is nicely written
ReplyDeletemuch thank youuu~
DeleteHello Jo! i think you can add something in the 1st paragraph of your essay! you can provide them with facts or something else about globalization.
ReplyDeleteOkaayy, I'll add it. Thank youuu~
DeleteHi Jo, I think it will be more formal if you use a comma instead of the multi-dots, just like the one in the last paragraph
ReplyDeleteOkaayyy, iceeenn. Thank you for the correctionnn ^^.
DeleteAccording to Investopedia, Globalization is the spread of products, technology, information, and jobs across national borders and cultures. In economic terms, it describes an interdependence of nations around the globe fostered through free trade. Globalization has become one of the most influencial things that happened in this world. Globalization has affected so many aspects in everyday lives in every age, genders, and nations. It also affected a lot of things from food, culture, economy, industry, lifestyle, education, etc. This essay will be talking specifically on how globalization effects on women in Indonesia, starting from their Fashion Sense, lifestyle, and Liberty.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, the fashion sense. Many years before, Indonesian women aren’t as free as they currently are in terms of expressing their clothes. Especially because Indonesia is one of a country that has a high respect of religion, Indonesian women aren’t actually allowed to wear daily clothes that are considered ‘too-much-to-see’. In terms of their daily clothes, Indonesian women are expected to wear a highly-covered clothes, and other than that would become a trending topic nearby their neighbourhood. But as globalization occurs, Indonesian women are starting to adapt the daily style from the other countries, and started to vary with so many daily clothes style, including the previous style that are controversial in the country. Nowadays, women are brave enough to wear a short pants and a tank-top to go out from their house.
Second is the Lifestyle. There are so many aspects that could be discussed regarding this topic, but this essay will only covered a very small portion, focusing on the mindset of urban-lifestyle. Before, Indonesian women couldn’t care less about how their skin look like, what colour their skintone is, or what kind of transportation that they take. Even most of the time, Indonesian women would walk their way into a certain place that they desire to go. However, adapting the other countries lifestyle, Indonesian women nowadays started to shift their mindset into thinking that they have to care too much about everything in order to achieve the urban-lifestyle standard. One of the most famous example that are still trending right now, is Skincare. There are no such thing as that in the before era, but since Globalization starts to hit Indonesia, mostly adapting from Korea, Indonesian women started to follow these lifestyle, and starts to buy so many products just for their face. They also has a standard that they have to be skinny, have an hour-glass body, and glowing-glass skin in order that achieve the lifestyle standard.
Lastly, in terms of Liberty. Before, Indonesian women are expected to be at home all the time, they don’t have to care too much about their education, or choosing their life-partner, they aren’t even allowed to find a job that are ‘made’ for men, etc. But since Globalization strikes all of the liberty, it could be said that it has affected women liberty in a huge amount of impact. Nowadays, Indonesian women can be seen as a politicians, as a manager, or any other high positions that seems to be impossible to be achieved by women in the past. Also, there can be seen so many women are united and keep demonstrate about ‘gender equality’ and women’s right. It is all part of the globalization that changed the mindset of the women in Indonesia.
There are still so many things that has changed over the century because of Globalization. Fashion, Lifestyle, and Liberty are only a small portion of it. But it can be concluded that Globalization plays a big role in terms of world-change, and create the life of Indonesian women into a better place, or worst.